Saturday, December 17, 2005

No More Filibustering On My NaNoFiMo Novel

There are weekly challenges on nanofimo.org to write 7,000 words from Monday when you wake up until Sunday when you go to sleep. Last week I failed miserably but this week I'm going to try and actually get a little smiley face next to my name (the only reward and it's on the honor system). To accomplish this feat, I have to write 2,561 words in the next two days.


11,232 / 30,000
(37.4%)



If I can't do that, I might as well throw in the towel on the whole excursion.

The word count may be made a little more difficult by the fact that I'm going to West Lafayette, IN tomorrow to watch my youngest sibling graduate from Purdue tomorrow. But I should be able to write 1,200 words or so on the car ride before my laptop battery dies.

But, I'm going to actually attempt the "improbable" (but not the "impossible") by doing the whole over 2.5k today. It should only take a couple of hours but I keep putting off NaNoFiMo to make sure I stay ahead with watching the movies.

I'm at a point in the novel now where I have to decide exactly how the novel ends. This is the exact point where who the spy really is becomes transparent (and as we've learned in the United States recently, transparency and spy are not mutually exclusive) so I have to decide on one of three storylines to end the novel.

And, I think this time I'm actually going to have Liam get arrested, no false alarms. It feels like about six weeks ago that I asked on the nanowrimo.org boards (even though it was only about a week ago) what arrest procedures were in the United Kingdom. I will get 30,000 words this month but if I don't get my act together, there's no way I'm going to write "the end."

It's gotta go down today! There will be no filibuster!

Friday, December 16, 2005

The Second Half Of December Begins With Nothing Accomplished

It's really hard to believe that we're halfway through December. I'm definitely heading for a failure at trying to complete my novel this month. The whole 0-0-3,000-0-0-0-3,000 word count method isn't working very well.


9,836 / 30,000
(32.8%)



Hey look, I'm only 5,000 words behind pace!

Though I think the 3,000 words that I wrote a couple of nights ago are somewhat acceptable. I ended up finishing the chapter of the aftermath of the Emily/Liam "affair" and am now in the final push to the end.

The final obstacle that I have to overcome is finding a way to make sure that people mistake Liam for the police informant and I think I've come up with a pretty decent plot to try and accomplish this. Whether it's complex enough to actually grab a reader, who knows, but it's worth a try.

Yesterday was supposed to be the day that I broke 10,000 words in December but I did everything in my power to fail at that it would seem. Instead of trying to write, I watched "The Island."

And that movie absolutely sucked!

Sunday, December 11, 2005

So Long As I Don't Write A Cover Of My Novel Next Year

Even if you didn't participate in NaNoWriMo this year, there's a good reason to listen to the final official podcast from the site. You can hear the mysterious voice of yours truly extolling the virtues of participating in the event multiple times.

As I've stated a lot of times, I'm not exactly proud of my voice. But it's the first one that you hear after the host and Chris Baty's (also known as the deity of speed writers everywhere who shall not be blasphemed). Also on the podcast, you can hear rosemilk talk about writing over 110,000 words.

squirrelgirl22 didn't make the podcast this year that I could tell but she spent the majority of the TGIO party telling Sam Hallgren (the host of the podcast) that she didn't want to be interviewed after last year's drunken fun - and then getting interviewed anyway. I'm sure whatever she said was more articulate than my ramblings that made the cast.

The podcast is available at http://www.nanowrimo.org/modules/news/article.php?storyid=60.




Despite my protestations about Chris Baty's refusal to encourage writers to finish in December, I have certainly been heeding his words quite well. I did sit down and write 3,232 words yesterday evening which ranks as my 4th largest daily output of 2005 but other than that, I have been majorly slacking.

Nothing seems to be breaking my habit of not writing. But, I guess after cultivating that for 27 years, it takes a lot to break it, even in the current three. :)


6,793 / 30,000
(22.6%)



I also wrote 508 words this afternoon at the laundromat. It would have helped if I had a table to set my laptop on but I've never seen the place so packed on a Sunday afternoon.

Part of the reason today was a little slower was that I hate a mini-climax yesterday with the next morning after the awkward scene between Liam and Emily. I can't give too much away, but I felt every bit as drained as the character when I wrote the words that I did to make him feel drained.

And there is my big problem as a writer that I have to overcome. I just can't pull the trigger on having really bad things happen to characters. In the last two days I watched two of the most no-holds-barred movies in existance, "The Devil's Rejects" and "Saw." The people who wrote those screenplays (especially Rob Zombie) had no problem in having horrible things befall characters they carefully crafted.

Next year, I'm just going to get in a really angry mood at the end of October (pity all those in my life at that time) to be able to just rip the shit out of my characters. Well, I guess that's not the problem exactly. I don't have a huge problem inflicting damage on my creations, it's that I have a hard time having other creations doing it to them.

One of Liam's big characteristics in "Stars, Bars, and The Crown" is that he doesn't have the heart to do anything that might be necessary to save himself and others. And while, thankfully, I don't have to make choices like that in my own life, I have the same problem in my novel. It keeps the "bad guys" from becoming caricatures, but it also prevents the novel from reaching the next level.

I'm also going to write next year's novel from multiple points of views. What was I thinking having a single P.O.V. this year? I did two P.O.V.s with "Why Sleep When I'll Only Dream?" so it's not like I haven't accomplished it before.

Next year, I'm thinking three P.O.V.s. And in third person omnipotent. Technically this years is in T.P.O. but it's only because there's a narrator voice.

If I do a rewrite of this year's NaNo novel, it is being ripped to shreds and the P.O.V. is being spread out. I allude to a lot of events that will become fully separate chapters where they are written on-screen as opposed to off.

Yes, it could sound a little bit more like a real novel as opposed to a confused young adult wandering around aimlessly. :)

Saturday, December 10, 2005

The World Cup Draw Aftermath Is That I'm Still Sick

So I am officially sick today. I woke up at 2:00 p.m. this afternoon feeling no better after 11 hours of sleep than I did yesterday evening.

Somehow I've managed to not waste the day entirely as I actually cleaned my apartment halfway and throw out two garbage bags worth of newspapers. My apartment is no longer a frozen time capsule from October 31, 2005. :)

However, I still need to do at least two things. The first is watch a movie (I've been doing really well as I've watched eight movies in nine days of December), most likely "Saw" or "Devil's Rejects" - alright, maybe I am still frozen on Halloween. Then I actually have to sit down and put hands to laptop keyboard and work on finishing my novel.

Pish, the problem with having so much extra time on the weekends is that I seem to be apt to waste it pretty well.

Friday, December 09, 2005

Reviewing What Happened Yesterday

I finally got my act together yesterday night, sat down and finished Chapter 19 of my NaNoWriMo/NaNoFiMo novel. 860 somewhat awkward words later, the uncomfortable scene where Liam cheats on Mia with Emily is written.


3,053 / 30,000
(10.2%)



I saw it's uncomfortable because that's the way I designed it. Basically I took the middle ground where Emily is intentionally seducing Liam and the protagonist takes the bait, rationalizing it as "doing it for the cause" because he's still not sure if Emily is wired. So what's the best way to make sure there's no recording devices on her? Get her naked of course (at least in Liam's mind).

The way I wrote it is that the door and the scene close right after Emily closes Liam and Mia's bedroom door behind the main character. I'm thinking they don't actually have sex but enough has already happened that Liam has officially cheated on his fiancee for real in the way he thinks (and whether this is actually happening or not) his fiancee is cheating on him with Matthew Starwood.

Now, Mia is not going to see it that way and it's going to make a good part of the story later on (though at the rate I'm going, that's not going to happen until April).

Now comes a really exciting part of the story where the happy tryst of sorts is broken up by a knock at the door by Officer Charlton who's come to arrest Liam.

Yesterday, for only the second time since the start of November, I used the "Character and Plot Realism Q&A" forum on nanowrimo.org to pose a query on arrest procedures in the United Kingdom.

I did this because I don't want the scene to be unrealistic. I needed to clear up things like: are there miranda rights in the United Kingdom and do they arrest people in the name of the soverign?

The answers turn out to be yes (but they are not required as in the United States) and no. But a Brit who answered my question said that he thought in an alternate reality there would be nothing wrong with someone being arrested "in the name of the queen."

So I think I will have Officer Charlton say this. If it turns out my beta readers are disturbed by this, I'll just take it out later.

When I'm going to write Chapter 20 remains to be seen as this weekend I'm going to try to clean up my apartment and such. I know I'll start and probably write a good 2,000-5,000 words this weekend. But with how long a lot of my chapters are, who knows if this will mean finishing it?

Tuesday, December 06, 2005

The Reward For Hard Work Means Nothing

So I still didn't pull the trigger on the evil thing yesterday night. I wrote another thousand words or so and got right up to the point where the event was going to happen, before I stopped writing.

I almost wish I were blogging this novel live since this would be the perfect place for a pick-a-path book type question.


2,193 / 30,000
(7.3%)



Basically what the situation comes down to is this. Mia is on a campaign junket in northern Ohio with Starwood and Liam (who suspects his fiancee is carrying on an affair with the candidate) is home alone in Detroit.

He figures that this is the perfect time to bring Emily (his ex-girlfriend before Mia) around and let her know to get out of her job spying for him at the Cane and Candle. Liam, on the verge of a nervous breakdown confronts Emily on what he heard from Callum, that the two were an item.

Emily gets really angry, tells Liam that she can't believe he doesn't trust her after "all they've been through and all they've done" and starts to leave. This gets Liam's worry up as the suspicions that she's in cahoots with the police get aroused again.

The situation now is this. I'm tempted to have Emily just rip off her blouse and scream, "do you see a wire here?" to Liam (earlier in the book, Liam had Mia search Emily) and who knows what happens from there.

Liam could either:

  • Take the high road, tell Emily that he trusts her now.
  • Cheat on Mia with Emily because he suspects Mia is having an affair.
  • Have Officer Charlton bust in an arrest Liam on Enemies of the Commonwealth charges, meaning Emily is the police informant.

    I don't think that the third is an option since I don't think I'm ready to reveal who the informant is yet. The second one is probably the one I'm going to take. But that's what's making the scene awkward. Do I really want to take that path for the rest of the book.

    Liam is fast becoming very unlikeable and I didn't set out to make him an anti-hero.

    At least I've got a lot of time at work to think about it.
  • Monday, December 05, 2005

    Feeling Very Not Nice Today In Early December

    Why I'm in a pissy mood today has nothing to do with "March Of The Penguins" though I seriously want the time I spent watching that "documentary" back. In the time it took to watch that, I could have shoved a lot of eggs up my ass too!

    No, I'm pissed off today because I got to sleep at 2:15 a.m. yesterday.

    Oh I could have gotten to sleep earlier for sure, but I decided I was going to do the speed noveling world a favor and redesign the NaNoWriMo spreadsheet for NaNoFiMo. I don't know how the designer did it, but he managed to hide a secret formula somewhere in the mix that I can't redesign.

    So the whole spreadsheet only shows 30 days on all the charts, leaves some cells blank, and puts weird numbers in others. But, in general, it's close enough for government work.

    It's like that Coke Zero ad with the tranquilizer dart. Except I want to put that dart in the designers neck over the secret formula. :)

    Though the whole reason I suddenly got so interested in the spreadsheet was that I finally started NaNoFiMo at 12:15 a.m. yesterday. I wrote until one and got 1,036 words.


    1,036 / 30,000
    (3.5%)



    These words don't really add much to the story but I had a nagging thought going through my mind that I needed to get on paper. That thought was "why would anyone be willing to die to free themselves from an economic inferiority when they're no direct political control?"

    I figured I had to explain that before I got much further into the book. Apparently Liam and company feel there is a secret shadow government from the United Kingdom controlling the United States in my alternate historical timeline. Whether that's true or not, I think I'll have to establish before the end of the book.

    Tonight's writing should be fun as I think I'm about to have something very evil happen. We'll have to see if I can go through with it or not when the time comes.

    Sunday, December 04, 2005

    Why I've Been Putting Off NaNoFiMo

    I had an entry for tonight all written that was relatively NaNoWriMo free but my laptop had connectivity issues and ate that entry. I'm hoping that I can't blame the TGIO party but ever since I connected to Fado's network, my laptop hasn't had a good connection at home.

    Not that I can blame this for the fact that while I've been a big booster of and have even posted on the boards of NaNoFiMo, I still haven't written a single word in my novel since the conclusion of November.

    I had big plans to do so this weekend but I instead chose to try and get ahead in my Netflix quest (which I mentioned in the interview so who knows if it will make the final NaNoWriMo podcast) and have now watched four Netflix movies in four days watching both "Carlito's Way" and "Carlito's Way: Rise To Power" today.

    These actually go along with my NaNoWriMo quite well as they're underworld movies. I haven't watched a good political radical movie in quite some time. That's my next goal since I should watch at least a couple of movies based on underground revolutionary movements before I start to do my editing. I've pretty much got the ethos of that particular subset of fiction ingrained but it doesn't hurt to refresh every now and again.

    Both movies deal heavily with my primary theme of "who can you trust in a world of lies?"

    And they were especially helpful in the fact that, at least in the prequel, it's not the major players in the drama. It's not the kingpins being discussed, it's low-level management. They don't pull the strings, but they have the resources. It's pretty much the same level as mine and proved some good pointers on how to make this low level interesting.




    Hopefully, my tales of low level political underground operatives is at least readable at the current time because besides being NaNoFiMo unofficially, December is also NaNoTraMo - I just made that one up - National Novel Trading Month.

    Last year turned out to be a nightmare since my trading partner never finished beta reading mine (though I can't blame her because it was pretty rough) and the one that I got was Science Fiction written by a 14-year old who padded his word count. I have no problem with word count padding but I wish he would have put back in the contractions before handing it over.

    The whole thing made me go cross-eyed. :)

    Though I do have to admit that by the end, I did really want to know how it turned out (unfortunately there was no ending). That's the thing about most NaNo novels. My friend Todd, who's not a NaNoer but knows a lot characterized them as the following, "all plot." And, yes, most of them are stories without deeper themes but some of those stories are interesting.

    This year promises to be much better. I got a romance novel from a 19-year old and reading through the first few paragraphs, I'm actually quite interested in what she has to say. If for no other reason than she has an epilogue where she goes through all her story's possible shortcomings.

    It does look to be a pretty simple story, but a very interesting one.

    My book, on the other hand, poor girl is a very complex story and very boring. :)

    She lists religion as one of her primary interests on the NaNoWriMo site so I was a little worried about that, but she promises there aren't any religious overtones so I'm happy with that.

    We'll have to see.




    Well, I'm going to cut this one relatively short since my goal for tonight is to get to sleep around midnight. I swear that I'm going to start NaNoFiMo the day after the night I get a good night's sleep.

    I should be helped out by the fact that "Prison Break" has ended its season but won't be helped out by the fact that I still have "The Sea Inside" at home to watch to make five movies in five days.

    Tuesday I should have no movies from Netflix so that's my day. ;)

    Saturday, December 03, 2005

    The TGIO Party Or Never Discuss An "Anti-British" Novel In Front Of A Brit

    This afternoon was the Chicago TGIO Party for NaNoWriMo and unlike the kickoff party, there are no pictures. The turnout was notably smaller than the half-a-million that we seemed to have at the start of November, but it was still a pretty impressive 20 or so.

    Sam from the WrimoRadio podcast was there (as like I've said before, he's our resident celebrity for Illinois::Chicago) and unlike the last two times, I did not escape an interview this time. So if you hear someone babbling about NaNoFiMo on the wrapup podcast in a little under a week, we'll pretend like it's not me. :)

    Chances are if I do have a quote make the podcast it will instead be about the philosophy of returning to the competition for a second (or third or sixth) year in a row. I stated that my objective for this year now that I proved in the first year that I could write 50,000 was that this year I would write 50,000 better words.

    Though he asked me my comparative feelings about my two novels and after thinking really hard I said, "your first one is always special."

    I don't think that one's going to make the podcast since the last thing Chris Baty and company are going to want is people thinking after the first it doesn't mean the same.

    Thankfully rosemilk was there to correct me that "each novel is special because they're different. So, expect to hear her instead.

    I'm not cynical about NaNoWriMo by any means, I'm just not eloquent and so I went for the one-liner. ;)

    It wouldn't be a TGIO party unless I offended at least two people though, right? The first person was this Brit living in Chicago who was one of our great members of Team Chicago 2005. theakson is the name he goes by on the nanowrimo.org boards. Anyhow, Sam was interviewing me and asked what my novel was about. I told him the whole plot, but I think all that the other writer heard was anti-British.

    Yeah it didn't go right from there. Especially after I told him that I was going to Manchester in April. Being a former Londoner, he compared Manchester to being south of the Mason-Dixon line and said that it was pretty much a crap city (my words paraphrased, not his). Later he accused me of "barely being able to speak English" and being "a serial killer." The only thing missing was him punching me in the face.

    Though I swear I'm never going to get a crush on him. ;)

    The second person I offended was someone who is a big poster of the Character and Plot Realism Q&A boards on the NaNo site. I said that some of the people on there scared me because you can ask, "how do you properly dispose of a dismembered body?" and people will answer.

    He let me know, right then and there that he was one of the people who answered that question when it was proposed. He later went on to explain to us how to sneak a pocket knife onto a plane (I won't repeat it here since, you know, I am writing a novel about government surveilance).

    And yet I'm the axe murderer. :)

    You know the day is not going your way when the ML accuses you of being a cradle robber.

    Anyhow, there was some positive conversation during the course of the day too as I reconnected with some of my writing buddies who aren't on LiveJournal like mjmiguelito (and I learned that he's actually a Fire fan, who knew) and had conversation with my little clique.

    I swear, however, that cute girls grow on trees in the Chicago writing community as there were more than a few again this year. But that's not why I go to these things, I swear.

    But the most important development was that snowowl (who I found out today actually has a LiveJournal account) and reliantfc3 verified the final results of the Chicago/St. Louis Word Count War.

    And, as I reported back on the 30th, Chicago romped by approximately 750,000 words. About the end of the party, I got a wireless signal so rosemilk, squirrelgirl22, myself, and the few people who were left posted the following message on the St. Louis boards (this time under my name and not rosemilk's) called "We Own You St. Louis":

    "Greetings from the Chicago TGIO party!

    You are now officially our bitches. We beat you by over 750,000 words. Yes that is almost a million.

    We regret to inform you that we may have to challenge someone of our own statures next year. We are considering London. If you do not bring your "a" game next year you are gone.

    No longer our peers. :(

    Well, better luck next year when you challenge Cleveland. They may be a little more your speed.

    And we did outdrink you.

    So there."


    So far no angry e-mails like rosemilk got at the kickoff party. So far. So there's the big news. Snowowl and I kicked around the London idea for next year and we'll see how it flies. We'll probably still challenge St. Louis because no one seemed to object to multiple challenges this year, we just started small.

    And finally I got into an argument with some Chelsea fans (stupid Chelsea/Middlesbrough match was on at Fado) because this one girl didn't even know who Fulham was. I mean, here's this girl wearing a Chelsea jersey saying that Manchester United is the Yankees and not Chelsea and she can't even acknowledge there's another team less than two miles from their own ground that are in the same division.

    That and when I said, "there's another club in West London," she started naming off all the East London clubs.

    So I guess I don't feel too bad because she's an idiot at both geography and footcer. ;)




    Today when I got home I watched "2009: Lost Memories." This is an alternate history movie where Japan is still in control of Korea because Japan and the United States were allies in WWII (there's a lot more to the alternate history than that, but this is the cementing event).

    Anyhow, as most of the commenters on IMDB have already posted, "nice idea, shame about the movie."

    See, the problem with it is that the alternate history is corrected through time travel. So they set up this alternate history and then go back in time to correct it. It was basically switching genres from alternate historical fiction to fantasy mid-stream (and as rosemilk and I were discussing, the two can get pretty close at times with only real world physics and zoological constraints separating the two).

    But the idea was great and pretty close to my novel. The Korean terrorist group trying to get the time traveling device even meets behind a bar. Looks like I'm not the first to think that a logical location for secret meetings is the back room of bars. :)

    When they first go into the room, I actually said, "crap, there goes my story right down the tubes, it's already been done."

    But I'd like to think mine is a lot different since mine focuses on the terrorist group and not the police (like the movie did) and actually is a little more character driven. Not that "2009: Lost Memories" didn't have some amazing characters (it's a Korean police officer and a Japanese police office going head to head even though they start out on the same side and each has their own motivations) but there ended up being a lot of explosions.

    Still, while the movie was only slightly above average (and a lot of people don't even give it that much credit), I appreciated it because I haven't delved into other people's alternate historical fiction since I began to write mine.

    It's good to see that I uphold some of the conventions and shatter others. That's what I try to do in each genre I write in.

    Speaking of which, I think rosemilk and I dared each other on the train (though I was pretty drunk at the time) to write in each other's genres next year. So I have to write fantasy and she has to write historical fiction, literary fiction, or romance.

    That should be a hoot!

    I think we'll just do that in April for NaNoFools (since I guarantee our novels in the other genre will be unintentionally funny anyhow) and call it a day. :)